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  1. From an article: “[he] has two children, aged four and eight months, with his wife…”

    This is bad #phrasing, and minimally needs a "years" after "four", with a different choice of words even better. As it stands, it had me wondering how a couple could end up with only four months between the births of their two kids.

  2. From an article: “[he] has two children, aged four and eight months, with his wife…”

    This is bad #phrasing, and minimally needs a "years" after "four", with a different choice of words even better. As it stands, it had me wondering how a couple could end up with only four months between the births of their two kids.

  3. From an article: “[he] has two children, aged four and eight months, with his wife…”

    This is bad #phrasing, and minimally needs a "years" after "four", with a different choice of words even better. As it stands, it had me wondering how a couple could end up with only four months between the births of their two kids.

  4. From an article: “[he] has two children, aged four and eight months, with his wife…”

    This is bad #phrasing, and minimally needs a "years" after "four", with a different choice of words even better. As it stands, it had me wondering how a couple could end up with only four months between the births of their two kids.

  5. From an article: “[he] has two children, aged four and eight months, with his wife…”

    This is bad #phrasing, and minimally needs a "years" after "four", with a different choice of words even better. As it stands, it had me wondering how a couple could end up with only four months between the births of their two kids.