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I suppose that #EmpathAndAugur is basically one big "Sebastian misunderstands Erika" plot. But it doesn't really fit the picture of what people think of as "misunderstanding plot", maybe because "who Erika is and why" is a pretty big question, one that Erika doesn't necessarily know the answer to herself.

#witchpunk might fit the bill a little better, as there is a lot of "Ash does not see Lucine's intentions", but Lucine is not always upfront with them, in addition to Ash having to work through her own shit in order to be in a position to understand.

perhaps, all this is to say, I often hinge plots on "understanding", mis- optional.

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I suppose that #EmpathAndAugur is basically one big "Sebastian misunderstands Erika" plot. But it doesn't really fit the picture of what people think of as "misunderstanding plot", maybe because "who Erika is and why" is a pretty big question, one that Erika doesn't necessarily know the answer to herself.

#witchpunk might fit the bill a little better, as there is a lot of "Ash does not see Lucine's intentions", but Lucine is not always upfront with them, in addition to Ash having to work through her own shit in order to be in a position to understand.

perhaps, all this is to say, I often hinge plots on "understanding", mis- optional.

#WritersCoffeeClub

I suppose that #EmpathAndAugur is basically one big "Sebastian misunderstands Erika" plot. But it doesn't really fit the picture of what people think of as "misunderstanding plot", maybe because "who Erika is and why" is a pretty big question, one that Erika doesn't necessarily know the answer to herself.

#witchpunk might fit the bill a little better, as there is a lot of "Ash does not see Lucine's intentions", but Lucine is not always upfront with them, in addition to Ash having to work through her own shit in order to be in a position to understand.

perhaps, all this is to say, I often hinge plots on "understanding", mis- optional.

#WritersCoffeeClub

I suppose that #EmpathAndAugur is basically one big "Sebastian misunderstands Erika" plot. But it doesn't really fit the picture of what people think of as "misunderstanding plot", maybe because "who Erika is and why" is a pretty big question, one that Erika doesn't necessarily know the answer to herself.

#witchpunk might fit the bill a little better, as there is a lot of "Ash does not see Lucine's intentions", but Lucine is not always upfront with them, in addition to Ash having to work through her own shit in order to be in a position to understand.

perhaps, all this is to say, I often hinge plots on "understanding", mis- optional.

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Winter is A Thing in #EmpathAndAugur. I think it's represented in its entirety -- beauty, stillness, danger, coziness, isolation, anticipation of spring. I really like winter.

Winter is a thing in #witchpunk, but San Francisco winters: rain, green hills, not so much the cold.

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I'm very open that the first drafts of my books are hot garbage. plot holes, inconsistencies, threads that go nowhere, half developed themes and characters who are still figuring themselves out. I'm just pleased that there's nothing in #witchpunk that makes me outright cringe, unlike the first draft of #EmpathAndAugur. There truly is some anime cringe shit in there.

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I'm very open that the first drafts of my books are hot garbage. plot holes, inconsistencies, threads that go nowhere, half developed themes and characters who are still figuring themselves out. I'm just pleased that there's nothing in #witchpunk that makes me outright cringe, unlike the first draft of #EmpathAndAugur. There truly is some anime cringe shit in there.

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Hm, what is my first book? On one hand, we could interpret this as "the first book I finished writing", in which case that's #EmpathAndAugur. Or maybe the first book-length thing I endeavored to write, which was some naruto-aesthetics ported over to generic medieval fantasy in the 4th grade... But it might be overstating it to consider the idea "developed". Honestly, most of the time the idea develops as I write the book. The only time I "developed an idea *for* a book" is probably my most recent one, #witchpunk, the initial impetus was the interesting intersection of witchcraft which often incorporates bodily components, and the tech industry's inquest into genetics and its attitude towards user data....

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Hm, what is my first book? On one hand, we could interpret this as "the first book I finished writing", in which case that's #EmpathAndAugur. Or maybe the first book-length thing I endeavored to write, which was some naruto-aesthetics ported over to generic medieval fantasy in the 4th grade... But it might be overstating it to consider the idea "developed". Honestly, most of the time the idea develops as I write the book. The only time I "developed an idea *for* a book" is probably my most recent one, #witchpunk, the initial impetus was the interesting intersection of witchcraft which often incorporates bodily components, and the tech industry's inquest into genetics and its attitude towards user data....

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#witchpunk is unusual in which I think it will be the first story I've written where the characters *do* come out, and even then, only in the epilogue (so I haven't even written it yet, haha)

in #EmpathAndAugur, *I* think Erika has extremely agender vibes, and Sebastian definitely enjoys his femme side, but the story takes place in the nineties, so coming out isn't something they would do. Heck, Erika's sexuality isn't even a thing in the first book because she's got too many other problems in her life to think about her sexuality. There are lots of reasons people don't come out---it might not be hashtag OwnVoices-suitable but it doesn't make them less queer.

(though also that said, the author's interpretation is not definitive, so if you read my books and don't agree, that's also legit!)

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#witchpunk is unusual in which I think it will be the first story I've written where the characters *do* come out, and even then, only in the epilogue (so I haven't even written it yet, haha)

in #EmpathAndAugur, *I* think Erika has extremely agender vibes, and Sebastian definitely enjoys his femme side, but the story takes place in the nineties, so coming out isn't something they would do. Heck, Erika's sexuality isn't even a thing in the first book because she's got too many other problems in her life to think about her sexuality. There are lots of reasons people don't come out---it might not be hashtag OwnVoices-suitable but it doesn't make them less queer.

(though also that said, the author's interpretation is not definitive, so if you read my books and don't agree, that's also legit!)

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All the time. #EmpathAndAugur has several scene's from side character's POV, and then we introduce another POV in a fairly dramatic way. Sebastian's POV is still around though so maybe it doesn't quite count in the spirit of the question?

Similarly, #witchpunk we introduce a few new POVs, and often there are scenes that make more sense to tell from someone other than the main-er characters' POV as well, but Ash's POV gets quite scarce in the last third of the story, even though she's still around.

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All the time. #EmpathAndAugur has several scene's from side character's POV, and then we introduce another POV in a fairly dramatic way. Sebastian's POV is still around though so maybe it doesn't quite count in the spirit of the question?

Similarly, #witchpunk we introduce a few new POVs, and often there are scenes that make more sense to tell from someone other than the main-er characters' POV as well, but Ash's POV gets quite scarce in the last third of the story, even though she's still around.

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Late on this, as I was ruminating on it.

#EmpathAndAugur seems to be somewhat unique, if my inability to find comps for it says anything (it might not). The genre seems a little sparser in books than in television and comics. What is there seems to either be from the cops' POV or urban fantasy, which has more elements of fantasy and also pulls more from established mythos. I like to think I'm also finding an unusual balance between practical and literary in terms of the writing. But I may be high on my own supply lol.

#WitchPunk is easier. I've got a lot of domain knowledge and also I think an approach to both magic and code/science that I think only comes from a sort of genuine love of both sides...

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#witchpunk has several! seemed only appropriate, given both the seasonality of magic and college partying. One of the first few scenes is a halloween party: https://nebulos.space/witchpunk_halloween.html, and then one of the climactic ones at Imbolg, which features milk themed cocktails lmao.

#EmpathAndAugur is much more somber, but this counts, I think.

"They fried the best cuts of deer on a pan over an open fire, then washed them down with the cheap beer Sebastian had bought at the town’s general store. Halfway through the evening, the power died, but their bellies were too full with warm food to venture out into the cold to fix it."

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Been trying to remember exactly how much of #EmpathAndAugur happened in the edit while I write #witchpunk. Almost all the best parts. Need to stop stressing out about whether witchpunk is good and just get the bones out. The magic can come later.

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Bold of you to assume I'm not already writing outside my specialty!

Honestly not really sure what my specialty is. I read almost exclusively sci fi, but I've been informed that #EmpathAndAugur is not actually science fiction (though it smells like it), and #witchpunk is only half sci-fi. I suspect the genre in my heart is actually horror, though it's rare that the main intent of a story is to scare, which you know, is kind of the genre definition of horror. I also write a lot of "supernatural" stuff, but it feels extremely wrong to call it fantasy, since other than the metaphysics I don't engage with any of the other fantasy genre fixtures.

So I guess if we're gonna give up and say my main thing is "speculative", then I guess I'd next most likely be writing contemporary. Though in fact I have already and it leans hard into the horror/supernatural, but in an extremely ambiguous way. After that, I'll be honest, I'd probably go for non-fiction lmao. Sorry, historical (and romance feels like cheating, since there are romantic elements in all of the above)..

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My other stories aren't really as interesting responses, #EmpathAndAugur is set precisely according to the invention of the fMRI just for a minor detail, but otherwise doesn't have much interaction. #witchpunk is so deeply technologically involved that like, where would I start lol.

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