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  1. Fairytale has now reaced second draft in Ellipsus, and I will write it properly out this month - all 10 chapters.

    And it has a title too:
    Beasts at Arms - the Myth of Forest's Blessing

    (Yes little nod to Terry Pratchett there)

    #writing #Bookstodon #SecondDraft #fairytale #DarkFantasy #GrimDarkFantasy

  2. Fairytale has now reaced second draft in Ellipsus, and I will write it properly out this month - all 10 chapters.

    And it has a title too:
    Beasts at Arms - the Myth of Forest's Blessing

    (Yes little nod to Terry Pratchett there)

    #writing #Bookstodon #SecondDraft #fairytale #DarkFantasy #GrimDarkFantasy

  3. Fairytale has now reaced second draft in Ellipsus, and I will write it properly out this month - all 10 chapters.

    And it has a title too:
    Beasts at Arms - the Myth of Forest's Blessing

    (Yes little nod to Terry Pratchett there)

    #writing #Bookstodon #SecondDraft #fairytale #DarkFantasy #GrimDarkFantasy

  4. Fairytale has now reaced second draft in Ellipsus, and I will write it properly out this month - all 10 chapters.

    And it has a title too:
    Beasts at Arms - the Myth of Forest's Blessing

    (Yes little nod to Terry Pratchett there)

    #writing #Bookstodon #SecondDraft #fairytale #DarkFantasy #GrimDarkFantasy

  5. I'm happy to have reached the 100-page mark for the AP3 second draft. Been working on it for over a month now. Let's hope I can hit 200 pages soon!

    #AP3 #ArmoredPiercing3 #WIP #workinprogress #seconddraft #writing #selfpublishing #readingcommunity #bookcommunity #sequel #militaryfiction #action

  6. Revelation — Hindsight, Chapter 12, Part 2 Bill pushed the snow shovel across the driveway. The work was therapeutic. Simple. Physical. Mindless. The solitude was too much of a luxury. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialfiction #seconddraft #onlinenovel #pandemic #dystopian

    Revelation — Hindsight, Chapte...

  7. After several days of rain, even the grass was starting to look green again. Pine cones lay scattered on the ground, where they had fallen. So much had changed. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialnovel #seconddraft #dystopian #fiction #pandemic

    The Rain — Hindsight, Chapter ...

  8. After several days of rain, even the grass was starting to look green again. Pine cones lay scattered on the ground, where they had fallen. So much had changed. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialnovel #seconddraft #dystopian #fiction #pandemic

    The Rain — Hindsight, Chapter ...

  9. After several days of rain, even the grass was starting to look green again. Pine cones lay scattered on the ground, where they had fallen. So much had changed. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialnovel #seconddraft #dystopian #fiction #pandemic

    The Rain — Hindsight, Chapter ...

  10. After several days of rain, even the grass was starting to look green again. Pine cones lay scattered on the ground, where they had fallen. So much had changed. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialnovel #seconddraft #dystopian #fiction #pandemic

    The Rain — Hindsight, Chapter ...

  11. Hindsight — Chapter 10 — Oct 2020 — Ride the Second Wave All year, it’s been December that I was worried about, but October is the month that has given me the most trouble. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #Novel-Tie-In #BehindTheScenes #HindsightUniverse #seconddraft #serialnovel

    Behind the Scenes of Chapter 1...

  12. A couple of days late, but better late than never! The coming cold front would clear out the colours. Winter was coming, and he was filled with foreboding about it. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #seconddraft #serialnovel #dystopian #pandemic #fiction

    The Hill and the Porch — Hinds...

  13. Henry — Hindsight, Chapter 10, Part 2 Will was out of sorts. He didn’t say it out loud, but he didn’t need to: Juss knew exactly what he was going through open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #seconddraft #serialnovel #dystopian #pandemic #fiction #serialfiction #onlinenovel

    Henry — Hindsight, Chapter 10,...

  14. Curbside — Hindsight, Chapter 10, Part 1 He smiled at the view, even though it was overcast, and the grey sky dulled the colours; they'd moved here for views like this open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #novel #seconddraft #serialnovel #dystopian #pandemic #fiction

    Curbside — Hindsight, Chapter ...

  15. So Shall He Reap — Hindsight, Chapter 9, Part 3 Bill had the table set up on the flat area at the top of the slope, and the knives and kitchen shears were laid out on a chair. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialnovel #seconddraft #dystopian #pandemic #serialfiction

    So Shall He Reap — Hindsight, ...

  16. For The World — Hindsight, Chapter 9, Part 1 The crickets chirped, an overwhelming white noise that covered most things he was otherwise likely to hear. Louder than the crickets, the chickens babbled. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialnovel #onlinenovel #seconddraft #dystopian

    For The World — Hindsight, Cha...

  17. I’m realizing that at its heart, this POV arc is a #mystery #WhoDunnit. Part of the problem with the post-midpoint scenes is that only one suspect remains, making the story seem like it’s stalled until the protagonist figures it out.

    Among other things, I need to maintain the mystery. Make sure other suspects are guilty of and hiding something, just not the main thing. I can already tell the #SecondDraft is going to be much stronger. I’m learning so much.

    #AmWriting #AmWritingFantasy

  18. I’m realizing that at its heart, this POV arc is a #mystery #WhoDunnit. Part of the problem with the post-midpoint scenes is that only one suspect remains, making the story seem like it’s stalled until the protagonist figures it out.

    Among other things, I need to maintain the mystery. Make sure other suspects are guilty of and hiding something, just not the main thing. I can already tell the #SecondDraft is going to be much stronger. I’m learning so much.

    #AmWriting #AmWritingFantasy

  19. I’m realizing that at its heart, this POV arc is a #mystery #WhoDunnit. Part of the problem with the post-midpoint scenes is that only one suspect remains, making the story seem like it’s stalled until the protagonist figures it out.

    Among other things, I need to maintain the mystery. Make sure other suspects are guilty of and hiding something, just not the main thing. I can already tell the #SecondDraft is going to be much stronger. I’m learning so much.

    #AmWriting #AmWritingFantasy

  20. I’m realizing that at its heart, this POV arc is a #mystery #WhoDunnit. Part of the problem with the post-midpoint scenes is that only one suspect remains, making the story seem like it’s stalled until the protagonist figures it out.

    Among other things, I need to maintain the mystery. Make sure other suspects are guilty of and hiding something, just not the main thing. I can already tell the #SecondDraft is going to be much stronger. I’m learning so much.

    #AmWriting #AmWritingFantasy

  21. We approach politics too often as passive spectators, watching, with our popcorn, a soap opera on which we can’t wait to see what the writers come up with next.

    But this is not a soap opera, and people suffer every day that we accept our place in the audience instead of picking up our pens, recognising our agency, and writing new stories for ourselves.

    #Politics #Action #Passive #Philosophy #Anarchism #Writing #Agency #SecondDraft

  22. We approach politics too often as passive spectators, watching, with our popcorn, a soap opera on which we can’t wait to see what the writers come up with next.

    But this is not a soap opera, and people suffer every day that we accept our place in the audience instead of picking up our pens, recognising our agency, and writing new stories for ourselves.

    #Politics #Action #Passive #Philosophy #Anarchism #Writing #Agency #SecondDraft

  23. We approach politics too often as passive spectators, watching, with our popcorn, a soap opera on which we can’t wait to see what the writers come up with next.

    But this is not a soap opera, and people suffer every day that we accept our place in the audience instead of picking up our pens, recognising our agency, and writing new stories for ourselves.

    #Politics #Action #Passive #Philosophy #Anarchism #Writing #Agency #SecondDraft

  24. We approach politics too often as passive spectators, watching, with our popcorn, a soap opera on which we can’t wait to see what the writers come up with next.

    But this is not a soap opera, and people suffer every day that we accept our place in the audience instead of picking up our pens, recognising our agency, and writing new stories for ourselves.

    #Politics #Action #Passive #Philosophy #Anarchism #Writing #Agency #SecondDraft