#seconddraft — Public Fediverse posts
Live and recent posts from across the Fediverse tagged #seconddraft, aggregated by home.social.
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I'm happy to have reached the 100-page mark for the AP3 second draft. Been working on it for over a month now. Let's hope I can hit 200 pages soon!
#AP3 #ArmoredPiercing3 #WIP #workinprogress #seconddraft #writing #selfpublishing #readingcommunity #bookcommunity #sequel #militaryfiction #action
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Revelation — Hindsight, Chapter 12, Part 2 Bill pushed the snow shovel across the driveway. The work was therapeutic. Simple. Physical. Mindless. The solitude was too much of a luxury. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialfiction #seconddraft #onlinenovel #pandemic #dystopian
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After several days of rain, even the grass was starting to look green again. Pine cones lay scattered on the ground, where they had fallen. So much had changed. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialnovel #seconddraft #dystopian #fiction #pandemic
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The Darkness — Hindsight, Chapter 11, Part 2 Bill leaned on the snow shovel and sighed. His breath made a cloud in front of his face. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialfiction #seconddraft #onlinenovel #pandemic #dystopian #speculative
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Henry — Hindsight, Chapter 10, Part 2 Will was out of sorts. He didn’t say it out loud, but he didn’t need to: Juss knew exactly what he was going through open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #seconddraft #serialnovel #dystopian #pandemic #fiction #serialfiction #onlinenovel
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Bill glowered ineffectually at the trespassers in the back garden. There was nothing he could do about them BUT glower. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialfiction #seconddraft #onlinenovel #dystopian #pandemic #postpandemic
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For The World — Hindsight, Chapter 9, Part 1 The crickets chirped, an overwhelming white noise that covered most things he was otherwise likely to hear. Louder than the crickets, the chickens babbled. open.substack.com/pub/neilshoo... #Hindsight #serialnovel #onlinenovel #seconddraft #dystopian
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Thoughts that Keep Me Going While I Write the Second Draft of My Fantasy Novel
Because this is the hardest thing I've ever done Continue reading on The Writing Cooperative »
https://writingcooperative.com/thoughts-that-keep-me-going-while-i-write-the-second-draft-of-my-fantasy-novel-d26c2e7c70c#novelwriting #writing #writingmotivation #fantasywriting #seconddraft
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I’m realizing that at its heart, this POV arc is a #mystery #WhoDunnit. Part of the problem with the post-midpoint scenes is that only one suspect remains, making the story seem like it’s stalled until the protagonist figures it out.
Among other things, I need to maintain the mystery. Make sure other suspects are guilty of and hiding something, just not the main thing. I can already tell the #SecondDraft is going to be much stronger. I’m learning so much.
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We approach politics too often as passive spectators, watching, with our popcorn, a soap opera on which we can’t wait to see what the writers come up with next.
But this is not a soap opera, and people suffer every day that we accept our place in the audience instead of picking up our pens, recognising our agency, and writing new stories for ourselves.
#Politics #Action #Passive #Philosophy #Anarchism #Writing #Agency #SecondDraft
