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  1. Started my vacation activities by revising my Guardian Angel story following the critiques I received at #CritiqueCircle. No major upheavals, but many small fixes.

    If you haven't read it yet, or have but would like to read the new version, there it is:

    albert.aribaud.net/en/2020/07/

    Of course, #CritiqueWelcome.

    Now onto The Benefactor. That one will have to undergo *serious* surgery.

    #CreativeToots #AmWriting #Fantasy.

  2. Alright, so my urban-fantasy-ish short story _The Guardian Angel_ (not sure if I'll keep "The" in the title) is up on #CritiqueCircle for critters to lash, since yesterday and until next Wednesday!

    If you're not on CC but want to read _Guardian Angel_, you can find it on my site too:

    albert.aribaud.net/en/2020/07/

    Freel free to comment, there or here!

    (Previous submission, _The Benefactor_, was quite fruitful, so I'm hoping this one will be too.)

    #amWriting #CritiqueWelcome #CreativeToots