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Started my vacation activities by revising my Guardian Angel story following the critiques I received at #CritiqueCircle. No major upheavals, but many small fixes.
If you haven't read it yet, or have but would like to read the new version, there it is:
https://albert.aribaud.net/en/2020/07/04/guardian-angel/
Of course, #CritiqueWelcome.
Now onto The Benefactor. That one will have to undergo *serious* surgery. -
Alright, so my urban-fantasy-ish short story _The Guardian Angel_ (not sure if I'll keep "The" in the title) is up on #CritiqueCircle for critters to lash, since yesterday and until next Wednesday!
If you're not on CC but want to read _Guardian Angel_, you can find it on my site too:
https://albert.aribaud.net/en/2020/07/04/guardian-angel/
Freel free to comment, there or here!
(Previous submission, _The Benefactor_, was quite fruitful, so I'm hoping this one will be too.)